June 2 1999.
Now that I am back at last I can tell the extraordinary story, the true story.
It all began when our teacher Mr. Curtis-Brignall announced that our class (7MW) had just won the nationwide essay competition.
Now that I am back at last I can tell the extraordinary story, the true story.
It all began when our teacher Mr. Curtis-Brignall announced that our class (7MW) had just won the nationwide essay competition.
The first prize was a mystery cruise for the whole class.
I got my parents permission and after a few days, it was time for us to go.
Everyone was so excited including me. The ship was excellent, it was high-tech and cosy I loved it. Now was time to set off...
It was all going well for the first few hours but after that everything went wrong.
A thunder storm started and the driver lost control of the boat, up in the distance I could see a huge rock that we where about to crash into, I had to act fast and I thought because I was such a good swimmer I thought, I should jump off the boat and swim to safety and down to luck I saw an island in the distance which i managed to enter.
I had no idea if it any other inhabitants where on this island and to be honest I did not care I am just lucky I made it out alive.
I got my parents permission and after a few days, it was time for us to go.
Everyone was so excited including me. The ship was excellent, it was high-tech and cosy I loved it. Now was time to set off...
It was all going well for the first few hours but after that everything went wrong.
A thunder storm started and the driver lost control of the boat, up in the distance I could see a huge rock that we where about to crash into, I had to act fast and I thought because I was such a good swimmer I thought, I should jump off the boat and swim to safety and down to luck I saw an island in the distance which i managed to enter.
I had no idea if it any other inhabitants where on this island and to be honest I did not care I am just lucky I made it out alive.
I found a small dry area in some bushes so decide to sleep there for the night.
Who knows what will happen to me tomorrow but until then goodnight.
Who knows what will happen to me tomorrow but until then goodnight.
3 comments:
A thorough and interesting entry Tony. Remember you don't have to start each sentence on a new line!
I really like this writing Tony. Clear and precise. It would work even better in paragraphs.
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