I was on a plane trip to Canada when suddenly there was a clap of thunder the plane shook forward and back, side to side then the engines started to break up. lots of people tried to open the door the plane but all got sucked into the engines. After another 10 seconds the plane began to split, the half i was on fell on to land while the other half got thrown into the sea by a gust of wind.I could see the other people start to burn in the wreckage. Some of my friends drifted away to another part of the island but after that i could only hear the screaming and shouting. while i wasn't looking a huge piece of metal hit me round the face.
Jason
5 comments:
An action packed entry. It would have been good to have a bit more information about how you ended up on the island after the dramatic plane crash. Don't rush your entries. I want to read about every last detail of your ordeal!
Great effort Jason. Your description is vivid, and well done for including a picture and colour to your post. It makes it so much more interesting to read.
well done jason
nice picture jason!
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