an extract by Ben Shaw
I was laughing with Amabel as we were watching an episode of the Simpsons, when the lightening flashed and the plane crashed into a rock. The students kicked the exit door and jumped out into the sea. It was cold and the waves were very big. There were lots of my friends
swimming in the sea.
3 comments:
What happens next? Sharks in the water? Huge waves threatening to drown you and your friends? Clinging to bits of the wreckage? Come on, I want to know more...
A great first effort, Ben, and it would be great if there was even more of it!
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by max
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