I was woken by the bright sun, it was then that i realised i was stranded on an island. I looked around and i didnt really see anyone, all i saw was things floating around in the sea and parts of the aeroplane that had crashed on. I tried standing up many times and when i did i thought i was going to faint. I looked around one last time, and i saw something poking out of the sand, i think it was somebody's feet!
3 comments:
Great detail at the end. Can't wait to see who the feet belong to...
Some lovely description, but far too short Franklin. Compare how much you have written with other members of the class.
i like it but come on franklin u can do better then that
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