my island is big with a lot of palm trees and a huge sandy beach that seemed to go on forever.There is a really tall mountain that has a stream near it.In the palm trees grow nice big bananas that are tough to pull down. There is the horrible smell of sea water lingering in the air.I could still taste the disgusting taste of seaweed in the back of my throat.







By Franklin Immanuel

3 comments:

min makes yours look rubbish!

ur some1 2 talk

very good work Franklin

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The amazing story of how class 7MW from Thomas Tallis School (Greenwich, London, UK) ended up stranded on a desert island and lived to tell their tales.

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